Advice on the Art & Craft of Writing

Storytelling is an art form that is as unique as the people who create each story. In writing, it is also a craft, with tried and true ways to convey meaning to others.

As I’ve studied and written fiction, I’ve found some approaches to creativity that truly speak to me. These techniques can imbue our words with meaning, breathe life into our work, and inspire us along the way. On this page, I’ll share my own writing tips, advice for the creative process, and insight from my experiences.

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Writing Advice

On this page, you’ll find:

  • Pay It Forward Day 2022
  • Revise to Impress Your Readers
  • 10 Unforgettable Writing Tips
  • Decoding the Query Letter: Free Download
  • Sample Query Letter: Free Download

Pay It Forward Day 2022

On Pay It Forward Day, a variety of authors shared their expertise during a free writing seminar held in honor of the late Mike Resnick on March 5, 2022.

Presentations included remarks by host Martin L. Shoemaker; Career Lessons for New Writers with C. Stuart Hardwick; The Coffee Break Novelist with Kevin McLaughlin; Revise to Impress Your Readers with Melissa F. Kaelin; The Quick and Dirty Novel Plan with Mike Jack Stoumbos; World Building Discussion with Andrea Stewart and Marina Lostetter, moderated by Tina Gower; and Kindle Vella with Crystal Renee Bechler.

Revise to Impress Your Readers

Get advice on how beta readers, writers groups and critique partners can help you revise your work and impress your readers.

On March 5, 2022, I gave this presentation during a writing seminar called Pay It Forward Day. Check out the slide deck for “Revise to Impress Your Readers: Getting Constructive Feedback & Finding Writers Groups.”

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10 Unforgettable Writing Tips

By Melissa F. Kaelin

  1. Don’t be a slave to perfection, especially in the first draft of your novel. The book, in particular the first chapter, will take shape as you write.
  2. Enchant the reader from the first paragraph. There is mystery in a great first line, and there is magic in a great first impression.
  3. Give each character a distinctive voice and style, letting it show in dialogue. The whole story comes alive when the writing achieves a successful voice, tone, and theme — and these work together to give the book some personality.
  4. Raise the stakes! One of the first things readers look for in a good story is the ambitions, hopes, desires and motivations of the protagonist, and the stakes must be high for our hero to embark on a truly transformative journey.
  5. Trust the reader. Ever repeated something to ensure the reader doesn’t miss it? When there’s subtlety, nuance or subtext — even variations on a theme — let the writing speak. Readers are bright! They will listen.
  6. Sometimes setting becomes more than just a place. Whether it’s the forces of nature, the direction an old house leans, or the obstacles created by a crappy car, the setting that surrounds your characters can antagonize, challenge, and inspire them.
  7. Bring the story to life with movement. Every chapter should serve a purpose, even if the purpose is to expose the truth of the characters. When there’s movement in every chapter, the pages almost turn themselves.
  8. Let the writing surprise you. Let it move you. Creativity is a gift, carrying with it the freedom to do anything you can imagine. If you write with this in mind, you might be shocked, comforted, and moved by your own words. So, too, will the reader.
  9. Read the words out loud. Before you share your work, listen to the lines. Hear the voice, tone, rhythm, tension, and resolution. Laugh to the humor. Cry to the pain. Smile to the victory. Revising the sounds of the writing will make the story sing.
  10. Don’t give up. As you work toward a polished manuscript or a publishing contract, never give up. Keep going. No matter how hard it gets. The published authors are the writers who persist.

Decoding the Query Letter

If you have written a novel, completed the revisions, and ensured the pages will resonate with readers, you might be ready to query!

Querying for a novel is a challenge in itself. It’s one step of the journey to becoming a published author that takes time and dedication. I should know! I started querying my first manuscript early on, and I am still working toward that initial book deal. With every attempt, I am confident I’m getting closer to my writing goals. At one point, I achieved a 20% request rate on my manuscript.

So, I’m happy to share a few tips with you!